Friday, 12 November 2010

First Draft



This is the first draft for our movie beginning. We have quite a few things to improve on, for example we need to sort out sound, and we haven't even included all the bus scenes yet, so we'll need to trim the current section down. We also need to decide on the titles and just fine tune a few other things, but as it's early days we'll definitely get all of this done.

1 comment:

  1. I agree, there are LOADS of things that need adding/changing to this vid...

    However, in terms of a concept, I think it's bloody brilliant!! You've got your spine/foundation of an opening and now just need to keep tinkering with it to get it up to Level 4 standard..

    Well done your group!

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